Crash

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The sky was as clear as a chill out sea, non a trace of disturbance in the distance. It was a beautiful day to be outside.

Hey kids! Grab your cycles/seconds and lets go for a ride! shouted my come from his workshop in the backyard. We raced to our bikes, grinning ear to ear. The anticipation was so powerful, I felt worry I could ride to the moon and back.

The three of us started out, our father in front and us two kids right behind, hobby like geese flying south for the winter. This is going to be fun. I thought to myself. We followed our father wad the next street from ours. Cory took kill like a rocket.

Come on, lets race! he hollo to me over his shoulder.

I stood up on my pedals and forced my little, yellow bike to brook up with him. We raced to the end of the street where we stopped to catch our breath and wait for our father.

Lets go this way, my father instructed as he slowly passed us. We turned left and headed down River Road. As we approached Carrs Hill, I could hear my fathers caution to be careful going down the hill.



I was so revved up from our race that I could not control myself. Not heeding my fathers warning, I shot down the concentrate hill. I did not see the danger that lay up ahead. My tiny, yellow bike moving faster and faster. I was so scared. I couldnt slow down. I heard my fathers voice in the distance behind, but I could not hear what he was saying.

And there it was, a pothole. I couldnt avoid it. It...

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